Thursday, May 17, 2018

Olivia 100WC #31

The Killer Orcadolphins


The Killer Orcadolphins live in an underwater kingdom named Wave Kingdom. They live in sunken shipwrecks and seaweed. The place the orcadolphins live is called wave kingdom because of the wave storm they had 1000 years ago.

 The king and queen live in the palace, which is full with diamonds and jewels. All the Orcadolphins get together every night for dinner in the palace.

 They play all day but at night they all burrow away in their shipwrecks too afraid to come out because because of the stinging shark that eats the orcadolphins. But one of them had a plan to attack the shark. And so she went. The next night the shark didn't come.

By Olivia

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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousMay 23, 2018 at 5:08 PM

    hi oliva good way to end your story the way you frished with not knowing what happend to the shark make suer you dont but words 2 times

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