Thursday, May 24, 2018
Notch Week 32 100wc
Ding dong! ¨What was that¨ Bob said, he opened the the door and found a package the, he opened it and he found something and it said ¨build your own monster truck toy¨. Soon he finished, ¨finally finished¨ he said to himself. His dad came along and said ¨what did you do to that toy¨, Bob answered ¨but i didn't understand the instructions¨. Here I will help you, after a while Bobs Dad had finished ¨boom done¨ Bob said. ¨Thank you.¨
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