I was my room reading a book, I saw shiny red button blinking on my table so I pressed it, it started beeping even faster! I hid under my blanket. I saw my whole house falling into a world. Cccrrrrraaasssshhhhh!!!!! My house landed onto the ground. I went outside and saw a sign that said ¨watch the sky, for crystal birds¨ then I looked up and saw the crystal bird. I got back into my house and pressed the red button again and saw everything was back as usual. But that sign also said “Welcome to the Lioness Fore Desert"
Thursday, May 17, 2018
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it was very good but some words were missing like it try to check harder
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it was very good but some words were missing like it try to check harder
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