Thursday, May 24, 2018

100WC #32 by Laine

One day I got a big lego set it was huge when I got home I opened the bags of lego there was heaps of lego I couldn't believe it. then I opened the instructions I couldn't understand the instructions I said they where to fuzzy for me to read. I couldn't  make the lego if I couldn't read it even a old man couldn't read it with magnifying glass it was that hard to read. I was so bored I just chucked It in my lego box and then I just went to get some food, chips ya.
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  1. AnonymousMay 24, 2018 at 7:30 PM

    I liked the way you described how hard it was to read the instructions. Next time think of adding some speech.

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