Thursday, May 10, 2018

100WC Week#30 BY ISABELLA.D

I was in my stuffing room in the museum when I heard a knock on my door.  “The bear, when did it arrive?” I said.  I told the guy to fetch my knife. He did then left.
I killed it and got my stuffing supplies and got to work before the guard came back. Nobody knows what my job is.  They all think I’m a Scientist like my dad but really I kill animals for my job.
When I was little my father went to Peru.  On the way he was going the shoot the bear but he didn't so he got fired.


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  1. AnonymousMay 14, 2018 at 2:56 PM

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  2. AnonymousMay 14, 2018 at 2:58 PM

    Hi Isabella D.
    I really liked the way at the end you let me wondering what is job was. Next time think of adding some distribution.

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