Hi, do you want to meet my imagine friend? She has the fur of a tiger the tail of the shark she has the wings of a angel but my fav part is her giraffe neck. Wait no my fav part is her head. It's a lion head with its big mane and she has the feet of a corgi and she lives in the place called Greenland with all the grass and trees and with the shade and sun with big and tall mountains and when it was winter they all come to my house to sleep.
Thursday, May 17, 2018
100wc # 31 Marissa
100wc #31 Marissa
Hi, do you want to meet my imagine friend? She has the fur of a tiger the tail of the shark she has the wings of a angel but my fav part is her giraffe neck. Wait no my fav part is her head. It's a lion head with its big mane and she has the feet of a corgi and she lives in the place called Greenland with all the grass and trees and with the shade and sun with big and tall mountains and when it was winter they all come to my house to sleep.
Hi, do you want to meet my imagine friend? She has the fur of a tiger the tail of the shark she has the wings of a angel but my fav part is her giraffe neck. Wait no my fav part is her head. It's a lion head with its big mane and she has the feet of a corgi and she lives in the place called Greenland with all the grass and trees and with the shade and sun with big and tall mountains and when it was winter they all come to my house to sleep.
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hi Marissa
ReplyDeletei really like the intro of your story and the end of it as well it make me want to read more thanks Marissa
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