Thursday, May 17, 2018

100 WC Week #31 by Issy D

“Lucy, Lucy come hear.” I said. ”but but, no come now we need to get on the ship before it goes.  Why because otherwise you will get discovered and they will put you in a Museum just because you are a talking, flying, magical Rabbit come on we're going to the Whispering Woods.” It is the most magical place in all of the lands there they won't judge you I think.

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